Annotated Bib Peer Review Ali Morrow

"Caffeine and Pregnancy: What's Safe?" BabyCentre. N.p., July 2013. Web. 11 Feb. 2014.

While pregnant you do not have to give up inducting caffeine all together however you should try and not consume so much throughout the day. If you have too much caffeine it can result in a woman having a miscarriage or the baby being born with a low birth rate. Just as the caffeine affects you, a higher heart rate, it does the same thing for the baby. Caffeine can also release acid in your stomach, which can cause you to become sick. Over the counter drugs have been known to have caffeine in them.
This article I read came from a baby center and it had to be approved by the BabyCentre Medical Advisory Board. Since it had to be approved it had to meet certain standards in order to be released, which mean it lacks any kind of bias. It was released in July 2013, which makes it a new source of information. The links included in the article all work and provide more in-depth information if one may want it. Overall, I believe that it did pass the CRAPP test.
I thought that looking into what will happen to the baby if the mother has too much caffeine would be very interesting. It opens your eyes to see what can actually happen to your body and your baby if you do have too much caffeine. I bet most pregnant women do not know that caffeine can have this effect on babies. Articles like these may be able to save babies if the mothers are aware.

"Caffeine and Your Child." KidsHealth - the Web's Most Visited Site about Children's Health. Ed. Mary L. Gavin. The Nemours Foundation, 01 Feb. 2012. Web. 10 Feb. 2014.

The central nervous system is what the caffeine effects and its can make people feel more energetic and more alert. The effects of caffeine are similar in children as they are to adults however kids react to less. Studies have found that if a child consumes 1 or more soft drink a day they are more than 60 percent more likely to become obese. Caffeine can cause the heart to become aggravated causing more heart problems and can cause nervous disorders with some children. It has been proven that caffeine does not stop a child from growing however as some scientists were worried about.
This is the most reliable website I have found so far. It passes the CRAPP test without any problems. This article was made on February first 2012. This article focuses on the facts, which make the bias stay away. The author is a medical doctor and is the founder of Nemours Center for Children, which makes her highly regarded.
I liked this site because I thought children would have similar reactions to caffeine as teenagers and adults do. However, they do not children cannot consume as much as adults and it can lead to more problems. When I was reading this it make me think about the future and how I have to watch what my kids eat and drink to make sure they are staying healthy.

Are the summaries detailed enough that you understand what the source is all about? Are there details that the writer included that are unnecessary to the summary? What questions are you left with after reading the summaries?
Did the reviewer evaluate the sources using the CRAAP test? Do you see criteria based judgements about each letter (currency, relevance,authority, accuracy, purpose)? What is missing?
Are the reflection sections complete enough that you understand how the writer responded to the sources? Could they include more information?
Based on these two entries, in what direction do you think the writer's research is going?
What questions are you left with after reading these entries?
What are these annotations' weaknesses?
What are these annotations' strengths?

Ali, both your summaries are well put together and cover the topic in the right way. They both relate to what you are researching and pass the CRAPP test and you describe that nicely. I don't think you're missing anything from the requirements. All together I enjoyed reading it and I also liked your responses saying what you felt about the subject. -Rachel Modrow

Peer Review- Olivia Knutson
Looks great! Just a few typos but other than that its good. They go into great detail. Complete enough to understand. Passed the CRAAP test. Looks good!

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