Annotated Bibliography Peer Review Ariel Tix

Are the summaries detailed enough that you understand what the source is all about? Are there details that the writer included that are unnecessary to the summary? What questions are you left with after reading the summaries?

  • The summaries are fairly detailed to where you can understand them. nw
  • Your summaries are concise and has a flow to it. -Kelly Wong

Did the reviewer evaluate the sources using the CRAAP test? Do you see criteria based judgements about each letter (currency, relevance, authority, accuracy, purpose)? What is missing?

  • I feel that you used the CRAAP test thoroughly. You made it clear that you went through each point that applied to your source. nw
  • Your CRAAP test seems to be used well. The currency and validity of each source has been thoroughly explained and reflected upon. -Kelly Wong

Are the reflection sections complete enough that you understand how the writer responded to the sources? Could they include more information?

  • I understood how you responded to the sources. You provide detailed information to show that you understand the source yourself. nw
  • As I said above it was easy to comprehend and see where the issues stand. I do think that you can broaden your opinion more when reflecting on the topic at hand. -Kelly Wong

Based on these three entries, in what direction do you think the writer's research is going?

  • I think your research is going in the right direction. nm
  • The research is going in the direction of main concern. -Kelly Wong

What questions are you left with after reading these entries?

  • I don't have an unanswered questions. nw

What are these annotations weaknesses?

  • You forgot one of the response paragraphs in the first citation… nw
  • ^ what NW has said above. You can also open your subject to readers of your annotated by possibly stating your main concern above the first source. -Kelly Wong

What are these annotations strengths?

  • Your summary paragraphs are detailed. nw
  • Summaries are concise and helps reader comprehend each source. -Kelly Wong
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