Arguing Cause Peer Review Claire

1. Does it flow well?
Yes i think it flows very well into each new paragraph. ML
Yes! I think you laid out your argument very well and gave really good information where it was needed. Anna
Yes. I think that you did a very good job with the flow of your paper. KM

2. How is the grammar?
I think it looked good but I am not the best with the grammar part. ML
For the most part it looked good! Anna
Looked good. KM

  • Does the argument answer the basic question: Why did this happen? What questions are you left with after reading the argument?

Yes you answered all the basic questions. Right now I am not left with any questions.
No questions, it was very well written and gave lots of extra information on the topic which helped answer a lot of questions while reading -Anna
Yes, you did a good job at answering all the questions. I don't have any questions right now. KM
* Does the writer establish that the problem exists and that we should care about it?
Yes very well. ML
Yes -Anna
Yes. KM
* Does the writer genuinely address opposition? What additional opposing viewpoints could the writer address? Can you imagine other objections to the argument?
Yes you do. None that I can think of right now. ML
Yes you addressed the opposing arguments. No, you covered mostly every view. Anna
Yes. You did a very good job. I can't think of any that you should cover. KM
* What is the argument's greatest weakness? What would you recommend they revise before the next draft is due?
It was very strong. ML
It was very good! just little nit picky things to fix mostly- Anna
You did a very good job. KM
* What is the argument's greatest strength?
The into was very strong. ML
I really liked how you started talking about your argument but then went back and provided the reader with good insight into the history behind it. Anna
I liked how you are very passionate about your topic. I can really tell that you care. KM

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