Arguing Cause Peer Review Kramer


  • Does it flow well?

It flowed together nicely. - Alyssa
It went together really good. TJ

  • Do you think I need to add more to my causes?

I thought you had enough. - Alyssa
I don't think you need anything else. TJ

* Does the argument answer the basic question: Why did this happen? What questions are you left with after reading the argument?
Yes it did. I just want to know if there is anyone out there really trying to stop these puppy mills. - Alyssa
Yes you answered everything really well. TJ

* Does the writer establish that the problem exists and that we should care about it?
Yes. I am a big animal lover so this really interested me. - Alyssa
Yes you did. TJ

* Does the writer genuinely address opposition? What additional opposing viewpoints could the writer address? Can you imagine other objections to the argument?
There's no opposition, but then again, I don't know how there could be.. - Alyssa
No not that I could find. TJ

* What is the argument's greatest weakness? What would you recommend they revise before the next draft is due?
No opposition, but otherwise it was well written. - Alyssa
Nothing really other than what Alyssa said about the oppositions. TJ

* What is the argument's greatest strength?
It was interesting, had support, and was well written. - Alyssa
You had really good supports and it was interesting. TJ

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