Arguing Cause Peer Review Luke Fox

Questions

Does the argument answer the basic question: Why did this happen? What questions are you left with after reading the argument?
It does explain why people are unhealthy. What do you feel is the main problem and the more important one to address.(RN)
Yes it does answer the question but the only question I am left with is why do the food companies fool us into thinking that food will be healthy when we eat it? (JM)

Does the writer establish that the problem exists and that we should care about it? What is missing?
Yes a problem is established but could go into more detail on why we should care about it for example go into some of the risks of being unhealthy.(RN)
Yes the problem is established but he needs to take a side on this topic, give us some main arguing points that we can take our own sides on as readers. (JM)

What seem to be the main points of the argument?
There are many serious health issues and doing what are causing those health issues.(RN)
The main points are the serious health risks that come along with over eating and other problems with the consumption of food in the U.S. (JM)

Does the writer genuinely address opposition? What additional opposing viewpoints could the writer address? Can you imagine other objections to the argument?
Opposition needs to be addresses as in what is the opposing view. Or you could just talk about what the more important causes.(RN)
He needs to give us a written position and he can talk about the mental struggles of the obese people in the world, because it isn't always physical problems. (JM)

What were your reactions to the text as you were reading it?
I understand where the paper is going and it is informative.(RN)
He needs some more info followed by some arguments but has a good start with some good facts. (JM)

What is the argument's greatest weakness?
The Thesis could have more information on the what you are going to be talking about and your main belief of what the main point is. (RN)
There is not a intro paragraph, having an intro will greatly help in getting readers attention and will help you provide a main thesis. (JM)

What is the argument's greatest strength?
Provides allot of good information and stats to support your information.(RN)
The greatest strength is that he already has some great facts with reliable sources which he can base his main arguments on and around. (JM)

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