Arguing Cause Peer Review Paris

I'm not the best at in text citation so my question would be, did I cite my sources correctly in my paper?
Also, what is a heading level 2?

Claire: A heading level 2 is just putting ++ in front of your title so it stands out. Also I suck at citations as well but yours look good.

Like So

Anna- I think your citations look good, I'm not the best with them either.

  • Does the argument answer the basic question: Why did this happen? What questions are you left with after reading the argument?
  • Claire: Yes it stats why this happened and no I do not have any questions after reading this.
  • Anna- Yes, you had a very clear reason and I do not have any more questions.
    • Does the writer establish that the problem exists and that we should care about it?
    • Claire: Yes
    • Anna- Yes
    • Does the writer genuinely address opposition? What additional opposing viewpoints could the writer address? Can you imagine other objections to the argument?
    • Claire: Maybe add a little more to the opposition side. It does seem like a tough topic to do that though so if you can't find another opposing viewpoint maybe just add a little more to the ones you have.
    • Anna- I agree with what Claire said… there isn't too much you could say for the opposition but in order to have a good argument you need a tad more for the opposing side.
    • What is the argument's greatest weakness? What would you recommend they revise before the next draft is due?
    • Claire: I would recommend maybe smaller paragraphs. It might just be me, but I lose my place easily with such a big block of text.
    • Anna- Definitely break up your paragraphs. It is easy to get lost in such big sections and you could make your argument stronger if you focused on your points more specifically.
    • What is the argument's greatest strength?
    • Claire: Thorough.
    • Anna- Good info!
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