Arguing Cause Peer Review TJ


  • Does everything seem to flow well?

It flowed really well - Dylan
It flowed well, there was just one part that could be moved. You talk a lot about sex trafficking and then talk about drugs and other problems, and then go back to sex trafficking one more time. Other than that, it flowed smoothly. - Alyssa

  • Do I have enough for my causes?

I would say so - Dylan
I believe so - Alyssa

  • Does the argument answer the basic question: Why did this happen? What questions are you left with after reading the argument?

Yes it does - Dylan
Yes, but the main thing I was wondering after I finished reading it was, what's your main problem? I'm not saying anything is wrong, I really liked all the examples you used because it really tied everything together and made me realize how bad it is, but I was just wondering if your main problem is the sex trafficking, or the negative things that have happened due to growth in population (especially because it's mostly men), or if it's just everything? - Alyssa

  • Does the writer establish that the problem exists and that we should care about it?

Yes he does - Dylan
Yes - Alyssa

  • Does the writer genuinely address opposition? What additional opposing viewpoints could the writer address? Can you imagine other objections to the argument?

No, but it is very difficult to agree with sex trafficking. - Dylan
Not really, but like Dylan said, I can't imagine that many people would agree with sex trafficking, or the other problems that are happening in that area. - Alyssa

  • What is the argument's greatest weakness? What would you recommend they revise before the next draft is due?

Like I said before with not having the opposition, but other than that everything looks good. - Dylan
The main thing would be no opposition, but I don't really know how you could change that unless you agreed with sex trafficking and everything else. I thought this was very well written otherwise. - Alyssa

  • What is the argument's greatest strength?

Having plenty of support for your argument. - Dylan
You have a lot of support and examples of what is happening out there. It's well written and I found it really interesting. - Alyssa

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