Outline Ah Pt Cs

outline this argument at the bottom of your proposal responses page. What is her structure? The proposal essay responses and outline is due by noon on April 9 for process work points

She introduces the problem by talking about her own experiences.

The problem is that big box stores are replacing the mom and pop stores. It takes away the sense of community and the locally earned money.
This is a problem that could be very common in any small town.

They offer cheaper items and provide jobs, but these jobs don't actually teach anything other than how to stock a shelf or run a cash register.
There are some benefits to bringing in the big box stores, including cheaper prices and a security with national brand recognition. The downside of this is that the money that comes in to these businesses doesn't stay in the community. Also, these stores don't offer benefits to employees and don't give back much to the community.

Big box stores should meet with community members to see if it would be ok to have a building there (before they start building).

Description of the proposed solution: how it would address the situation and its cause. How life would look once it was implemented.
Support (evidence and appeals) for the solution: why it should be implemented.
Counterarguments against other solutions: how other solutions fall short. Remember people, concede and refute. Concede and refute.
Return to support and justification for your solution.
V. Engaging conclusion that sums it all up and does not confuse the reader by introducing something new or returning to opposing points of view. END STRONG.

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