Peer Review 2 LM

Writers: Do you have any questions for your reviewers? If so, post them here:

Reviewers:

First: Please answer the writer's questions.^^

Then: Consider outside sources. Do they help support the writer's claims? Do the sources of support take over any portions of the writing and overwhelm the writer's voice?

Will this topic you can't go wrong with blackfish! I am very familiar with this topic. All of your source only help what you have written. ML
All of your sources have helped support your topic. KM

Did the proposal anticipate and respond to all valid arguments (opposing viewpoints)? What additional counterarguments and/or concessions would be helpful?

Yes very well. You did a good job with all the arguments that you made. ML
Yes, you brought up other arguments that people have made and argued your topic very well. KM

Is the organization of the writing easy to follow?

Yes very easy. I can tell you followed the organizational outline. ML
Yes it is very easy to read what you have written KM

What questions are raised in your mind after reading this proposal? Is anything missing?

I don't have any questions at the time. Like I know this topic very well so I couldn't find anything that I knew that you didn't have in there. You were even making points that I have never thought of with this issue. ML
I don't have any questions. Nothing was missing that I could see. You covered all the points very nicely

What were the most memorable pieces of text?

Everything about you topic interests me so the whole this really stood out to me. ML
I thought that your whole paper was interesting. I never really thought about this much, but it has really made me think. KM

What is the writing's greatest weakness?

All that I can think of is minor spelling errors. ML
Just a few minor grammar errors here and there. KM

What is the essay's greatest strength?

The overall layout of the paper os very nice. ML
Overall I think you did a great job with organization and keeping your readers interested throughout the whole paper. Km

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