Peer Review LM

Is my writing thorough?

  • I think that your writing is very through. KM

I feel like my paper is a little scrammbly and could use a bit more structure.

  • I think that your paper has very good flow. It was very easy to follow. KM
    • Does the argument answer the basic question: Why did this happen? What questions are you left with after reading the argument?
      • Yes, I don't have any questions at this time. KM
    • Does the writer establish that the problem exists and that we should care about it?
      • Yes KM
    • Does the writer genuinely address opposition? What additional opposing viewpoints could the writer address? Can you imagine other objections to the argument?
      • I can see that you are very passionate about your topic and I think you did a very good job at writing about your viewpoints. KM
    • What is the argument's greatest weakness? What would you recommend they revise before the next draft is due?
      • I think you are still in the process of finishing your paper, so I think it sounds a little unfinished, but I think that it is sounding really good so far.
    • What is the argument's greatest strength?
      • I think your last paragraph is your strongest argument. It was really well written. Good job! KM
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