Peer Review Workshop Megan L

Writers: Do you have any questions for your reviewers? If so, post them here: How does if flow so far? Are all my claims sounding like they are actually part of the problem?

Your flow is nice and your claims make sense to me-Taylor K.
The flow was good TJ


First: Please answer the writer's questions.^^

Then: Consider outside sources. Do they help support the writer's claims? Do the sources of support take over any portions of the writing and overwhelm the writer's voice?

Yes, the sources support the claims and no, I do not think the sources take over the writing.-Taylor K.
Yes all your sources supported your claims. TJ

Did the proposal anticipate and respond to all valid arguments (opposing viewpoints)? What additional counterarguments and/or concessions would be helpful?

I think they covered all the opposing viewpoints-Taylor K.
Yes TJ

Is the organization of the writing easy to follow?

Yes-Taylor K.
Yes TJ

What questions are raised in your mind after reading this proposal? Is anything missing?

I don't have any questions-Taylor K
None TJ

What were the most memorable pieces of text?

I never thought about Twilight and Teen wolf influencing people's opinions about wolves.-Taylor K.
I think overall your paper was interesting and that you did a good job. TJ

What is the writing's greatest weakness?

I actually think it is well done.-Taylor K.
Maybe a few minor grammar errors. TJ

What is the essay's greatest strength?

It is very well put together, with good soures.-Taylor K.
All of your sources did a great job supporting your main topic. TJ

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