Rhetorical Analysis Peer Review Hillger


In regards to this writing assignment, what are you most worried about?
The flow and structure of my writings, while I my think they are okay, I worry that other people wouldn't think so.


  • First, help the writer with their stated concerns ^

The paragraphs were well-structured & easy to follow. - Jolene
You did a very good job with the flow of your writing. - Katie

  • How well can you follow the writer's line of reasoning? Are there any places where you got a little lost, or things seemed less clear?

Not at all, the writing made sense and was very clear - Jolene
It was very easy to follow along with your reasoning and everything was very clear. - Katie

  • Does the writer address the rhetorical situation sufficiently (purpose, audience, author, genre, and context)? If not, where do you think they need to add or clarify information?

Yes - Jolene
Yes - Katie

  • Does the writer identify the:
    • catalyst
    • main claim (thesis)
    • supports
    • linkages
    • implications

Yes, all of the above was include in the writing - Jolene
All of the above was included in the writing - Katie

  • Does the writer give evidence from the article to back up their analysis?

Yes, evidence from other sources such as scholars and online newspapers - Jolene
Yes, the evidence that he used was very good and all from the article. - Katie

  • Finally, write a few sentences describing your reactions to the text as you were reading it.

I enjoyed reading your writing assignment. It covered all of the main points that Carr was trying to bring to light in his article and very well-structured. Great Job! - Jolene
I really enjoyed your writing. It kept me interested and was very well written. You did a great job including everything that was necessary to have, while not over doing anything. Good Job! - Katie

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