Solution Proposal Peer Review As

Writers: Do you have any questions for your reviewers? If so, post them here: I know the beginning is a bit scatterbrained… do you think the ideas I have introduced are good? Should I keep them or change them to be more specific and more similar to what my causal paper was about?

I think your intro is good but could be a little more specific LM

Reviewers:

First: Please answer the writer's questions.^^

Then: Consider outside sources. Do they help support the writer's claims? Do the sources of support take over any portions of the writing and overwhelm the writer's voice?

You need to have a works cited section so we can understand where the sources are coming from LM

Did the proposal anticipate and respond to all valid arguments (opposing viewpoints)? What additional counterarguments and/or concessions would be helpful?

I think you could look into whether athletes would prefer to have a female over a male coach LM

Is the organization of the writing easy to follow?

What questions are raised in your mind after reading this proposal? Is anything missing?

no LM

What were the most memorable pieces of text?

The burnout you talked about LM

What is the writing's greatest weakness?

length, but it is just a draft LM

What is the essay's greatest strength?

I think you made some good points about your topic LM

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