Solution Proposal Peer Review Belina

Writers: Do you have any questions for your reviewers? If so, post them here:

Is it clear what my proposed solution is?
* I think it's clear. NW

  • I find it very easy to follow. KW

Did I explain it well enough and describe why the whole system change likely wouldn't work?
* For the most part, I think. NW

  • Yes, it allowed me to understand the system change. KW

Reviewers:

First: Please answer the writer's questions.^^

Then: Consider outside sources. Do they help support the writer's claims? Do the sources of support take over any portions of the writing and overwhelm the writer's voice?

  • I think your sources helped this proposal immensely. The facts that you provide from these sources are interesting and are engaging. NW
  • As NW stated above your sources helped you plenty. I don't believe it is an overwhelming amount but, it is rather enough for the reader to understand the engagement to your solution and the crisis. KW

Did the proposal anticipate and respond to all valid arguments (opposing viewpoints)? What additional counterarguments and/or concessions would be helpful?

  • Yes, it did respond to the opposing viewpoints. NW
  • Yes the proposal would respond to all valid arguments.

Is the organization of the writing easy to follow?

  • Yes, very easy to follow. NW
  • Organization was great. KW

What questions are raised in your mind after reading this proposal? Is anything missing?

  • I don't have any questions and I don't think anything is missing. NW
  • No questions. KW

What were the most memorable pieces of text?

  • I like your example in your opening paragraph. NW
  • Your opening and (if that is your conclusion) left me engaged in the issue and solution you provide. KW

What is the writing's greatest weakness?

  • Some of the statistics are hard to understand, but once you think through them they are very helpful to your proposal. NW
  • As stated above, if the data/evidence are explained for your audience it would allow more of a understanding for your point. KW

What is the essay's greatest strength?

  • The amount of detail you have in this proposal is great. NW
  • I believe your flow and transitions were clear and allows the reader to basically understand your thoughts as the author. KW
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