Solution Proposal Peer Review Claire

Writers: Do you have any questions for your reviewers? If so, post them here:

  • Does my writing flow well?

Yes, I thought your writing had a very nice flow to it. It was easy to read. AS
Yes, I think you did a great job with the transitions between paragraphs. It made it really easy to read. KM


First: Please answer the writer's questions.^^

Then: Consider outside sources. Do they help support the writer's claims? Do the sources of support take over any portions of the writing and overwhelm the writer's voice?

I thought the outside quotes and sources you used supported your writing really well. They did not bog down your own voice, they added to what you were trying to say nicely. AS
I think your sources were used very well in supporting your topic. KM

Did the proposal anticipate and respond to all valid arguments (opposing viewpoints)? What additional counterarguments and/or concessions would be helpful?

I didn't see a lot of opposing view points this time. When you did look at opposing views you kinda mentioned them and quickly moved on to why you thought it was wrong. AS
I didn't see very many opposing view points, but it was still didn't take away from the point you are trying to argue. KM

Is the organization of the writing easy to follow?

Yes AS
Yes it was very easy to read. KM

What questions are raised in your mind after reading this proposal? Is anything missing?

Not many questions AS
No questions KM

What were the most memorable pieces of text?

Your intro was done well, it really drew me in as a reader. AS
I have to agree that your introduction really pulled me in and made me want to keep reading. KM

What is the writing's greatest weakness?

I think you might need to expand on your solutions a tiny bit more. AS
I think you should add at least one more opposing view point. KM

What is the essay's greatest strength?

It was well written! You have all the concepts and points that you need, going back and refining your writing is really all that needs to be done. AS
Your topic was very interesting, which made it fun and easy to read. I think you did a great job. KM

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