Solution Proposal Peer Review Katie

Writers: Do you have any questions for your reviewers? If so, post them here: Does my paper sound interesting or kind of boring?

No in my opinion it is very interesting and it is definitely a topic I have never thought of before. ML
It is an interesting read-Taylor K.


First: Please answer the writer's questions.^^

Then: Consider outside sources. Do they help support the writer's claims? Do the sources of support take over any portions of the writing and overwhelm the writer's voice?

I like how you have the quote box. I think it adds a lot to your paper and takes you attention but in a good way. ML
I think your sources support the claim, but do not take over the writing.-Taylor K.

Did the proposal anticipate and respond to all valid arguments (opposing viewpoints)? What additional counterarguments and/or concessions would be helpful?

I believe you covered all of the important arguments. I can't think of any arguments that you could add at this time. ML
I think you covered all of the opposing viewpoints.-Taylor K.

Is the organization of the writing easy to follow?

Very east to follow. You followed the organizational plan very well. ML
Yes-Taylor K.

What questions are raised in your mind after reading this proposal? Is anything missing?

Well i am assuming you aren't finished. If you are though i would consider adding more to the end because it just ends. I am left with questions of what else? ML
^^Agreed.-Taylor K.

What were the most memorable pieces of text?

Your whole essay is pretty memorable i have never thought of this topic at all. It never occurred to me that teachers get payed less working in a rural area. ML
I have never really thought about this topic before, it is very interesting-Taylor K.

What is the writing's greatest weakness?

Your greatest weakness is over all just the ending you have now. I am assuming you aren't finished though. ML
Just maybe adding to the end.-Taylor K.

What is the essay's greatest strength?

Your greatest strength would have to be all the arguments you have behind it. ML
Your greatest strenght would be the supports-Taylor K.

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