Solution Proposal Peer Review Paris

Writers: Do you have any questions for your reviewers? If so, post them here:


First: Please answer the writer's questions.^^

Then: Consider outside sources. Do they help support the writer's claims? Do the sources of support take over any portions of the writing and overwhelm the writer's voice?

  • Claire: Yes the sources help support her claim. The sources do not overwhelm the writing
  • Anna: Yes your sources help with your claim and they do not cover your voice, they add to the details you are giving.

Did the proposal anticipate and respond to all valid arguments (opposing viewpoints)? What additional counterarguments and/or concessions would be helpful?

  • Claire: Yes the proposal was done very well. I can't think of any additional counterarguments
  • Anna: yes you responded well to the counterarguments. You addressed them well.

Is the organization of the writing easy to follow?

  • Claire: Yes it is very well done
  • Anna: yes you have good organization and it flows well.

What questions are raised in your mind after reading this proposal? Is anything missing?

  • Claire: No questions
  • Anna: None

What were the most memorable pieces of text?

  • Claire: Throughout reading this paper I can tell the reader feels very strongly about this topic. Its very well done
  • Anna: I think synthetic drugs are an interesting topic and I overall like to learn more about them.

What is the writing's greatest weakness?

  • Claire: I don't see any weaknesses
  • Anna: sometimes your voice gets a little informal, or you repeat words a few times. look at your intro and maybe revise what you're saying- it seems like you say synthetic drugs in every sentence, try switching it up or combining sentences to make it less repetitive

What is the essay's greatest strength?

  • Claire: Very detailed and to the point
  • Anna: Great info! You seem like you are very interested in making this topic known and it was written well.
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